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Lamentation  

senfully 55F  
618 posts
5/29/2021 7:41 am
Lamentation

Lamentation
written May 25th, 2021

I want to weep
for all those lost

I rend my garments
for those without hope

I tear at my hair
for those in pain now

I bow my head
for those who will hurt
(which is all of us)

my lamentation sings out
so they know they are not alone

my words rise up
as my tears spill down
onto the page

let my tears - this lamentation
purchase a moment of relief from the gods
for the lost, without hope
hurting and in pain

the gift of one
deep sweet breath
filled with peace.

senfully 55F  
443 posts
5/29/2021 7:42 am

 Presumptuous of me, but I would if I could, make this grief be worth something to someone.


Laughandfuckfwb 48M
14 posts
5/29/2021 8:53 am

 I like your poetry


senfully replies on 5/29/2021 9:39 am:
Thank you for reading me and responding. Hope you have a great day.

sirtinysir 57M
3 posts
5/29/2021 9:45 am

 Hi there Senfully! Wow you hit it out of the park again.

I really like the last stanza:

the gift of one
deep sweet breath
filled with peace.

Love the analogy of a breath filled with peace... and of course being sweet too!

*whispering into your ear* you are worth it all!

hugs my friend!


Leegs2012 51M
96137 posts
5/29/2021 10:04 am

 Your words are very descriptive. Very nice!!


boobwhisperer69 61M  
8322 posts
5/29/2021 10:34 am

 Very appropriate for Memorial Day!!! I liked it!!!


kamaruhl3 63M
4985 posts
5/29/2021 2:42 pm

 this is so true. wishing better days for all of us


Ultraviolet_Sol 43M
622 posts
5/29/2021 10:14 pm

 Beautifully written.
*. *. *


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