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The halls of my mind  

senfully 55F  
618 posts
5/20/2021 4:23 am
The halls of my mind


The halls of my mind
written April 6th, 2021

I spend my time
walking the halls
of my mind.

Parts are like
an Escher drawing
with stairs that go
everywhere
and nowhere.

I take a set of stairs
that leads a spiral
circling inward
never reaching
the center.

Until my next step
almost takes over
the cliff
at the outermost edge.

Sometimes I sit
that edge of the world
looking out at
the neighboring universes
and wonder about wings.

Eventually I turn back
down a long unbroken hallway
which is as long as my life
and continue walking these halls
that are my world.

senfully 55F  
443 posts
5/20/2021 4:28 am

The above poem ties back to a poem a friend wrote. I wrote the following in response to his poem a few months ago. I was using a word or 2 from each line of his poem:

The haunted halls of my mind
written March 18th, 2021

Walking the not so empty halls of my mind
I watch the phantom echoes from the past
dart to and fro before my eyes
the past intruding on the present and the future
claiming space where it does not belong
refusing to be abandoned or laid to rest
I search amid the chaos for the key
that will bring these phantom echoes into the light
integrating them into my now so my waking days
are not filled with ghosts from the past
who roam the haunted halls of my mind
defying time and space
until all find some kind of peace.


Ultraviolet_Sol 43M
622 posts
5/20/2021 3:38 pm

I think it is an interesting concept to perceive the mind as a world... A world comprised of worlds, that venture into the specific. A world that can become hallways, dwelled by both you or I, or entities, entities that possess a life cycle perhaps similar to the entities that we know in our own world i.e. ghosts.

This calls into question whether the mind is shaped by the world or the world is shaped by the mind. Or how the mind is even capable of knowing itself or interacting with itself or the worlds that it has shaped or been shaped by...

Such wonders that come about when exploring the contents of ourselves.

Indeed, some of these or perhaps most of these, wonders, are often horrific and horrifying... (at least for me). Which calls forth yet more wonderment.

I am highly curious about the relationship between the mind and the human experience. or the phenomenon of the human experience...

This was a thought provoking write. For both you and I, it seems.

I am going to start work on something in this vein... That is the cool thing about poetry... Each being takes over where the other left off in the horizon...

Very cool.

*. *. *


senfully replies on 5/21/2021 7:12 am:
So many thoughts provoked by your response!

I am not sure about ghosts in my mind, but lots of thoughts, memories, and lots of me in there! lol.

I think the mind very much shapes the world. We are so human. I look at a tree on a good day, and it is a thing of amazing beauty. On a bad day I don't even see it, so is it even really there, in my world?

The horrifying. For me it's how I try to run from it and avoid it, that I think is a problem. You find wonder. I need to learn your wonder instead of my fear.

Thank you for your comments!

kamaruhl3 63M
4985 posts
5/20/2021 3:39 pm

love the imagery. happy to see you posting your poems again


senfully replies on 5/21/2021 7:13 am:
Glad to be posting again. Thank you for reading me and responding. Hugs.

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