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haiku 2
haiku 2 Dancing On Morning's Dew When I desire you, my heart sings like birds of spring . Dances on morning's dew. '''''''''''''''(mjc)'''''''''''''''''''' "A strong man carries a sword, a smart man carries a pen, a wise man carries them both. " |
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thanks jez "A strong man carries a sword, a smart man carries a pen, a wise man carries them both. "
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Beautiful, Mike!! Haiku is such a beautiful art form! Succinct, direct, yet elusive enough that ones imagination is sparked! I'm too wordy!! "A strong man carries a sword, a smart man carries a pen, a wise man carries them both. "
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Beautiful, Mike!! Haiku is such a beautiful art form! Succinct, direct, yet elusive enough that ones imagination is sparked! I'm too wordy!!
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Thanks Nan, I had enjoyed writing a few in school, had entered one in Polyamory Date's contest here.. further research showed the import of traditionally mentioning a season and ending the 1st or 2nd line with a stop punctuation. I do love that challenge. Odd about this one, by sound counts I get 5 - 7 - 5, yet from start to finish, can only count 16.. I do like that, honestly. Thanks for the read & comment my dear friend "A strong man carries a sword, a smart man carries a pen, a wise man carries them both. "
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cool i did not know you wrote in the haiku style
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