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haiku 2  

rm_eagleeyes32 66M
572 posts
5/4/2008 7:46 pm

Last Read:
7/22/2021 5:42 pm

haiku 2

Dancing On Morning's Dew

When I desire you,
my heart sings like birds of spring .
Dances on morning's dew.


'''''''''''''''(mjc)''''''''''''''''''''



"A strong man carries a sword, a smart man carries a pen, a wise man carries them both. "


rm_eagleeyes32 66M
1219 posts
7/24/2009 5:02 am

    Quoting  :

thanks jez

"A strong man carries a sword, a smart man carries a pen, a wise man carries them both. "


rm_eagleeyes32 66M
1219 posts
5/23/2008 2:05 pm

    Quoting sensualsatiation:
    Beautiful, Mike!! Haiku is such a beautiful art form! Succinct, direct, yet elusive enough that ones imagination is sparked! I'm too wordy!!
sensualsensations, thank you so much.. too wordy normally is me, but I enjoy this form, because I do have to leave that part of me behind.. form the thoughts into words.. then place them lil critters out for "adoption & enjoyment" and just hope for the best after!

"A strong man carries a sword, a smart man carries a pen, a wise man carries them both. "


sensualsatiation 114F
4789 posts
5/21/2008 11:33 pm

Beautiful, Mike!! Haiku is such a beautiful art form! Succinct, direct, yet elusive enough that ones imagination is sparked! I'm too wordy!!


rm_eagleeyes32 66M
1219 posts
5/10/2008 10:16 pm

Thanks Nan, I had enjoyed writing a few in school, had entered one in Polyamory Date's contest here.. further research showed the import of traditionally mentioning a season and ending the 1st or 2nd line with a stop punctuation. I do love that challenge. Odd about this one, by sound counts I get 5 - 7 - 5, yet from start to finish, can only count 16.. I do like that, honestly. Thanks for the read & comment my dear friend

"A strong man carries a sword, a smart man carries a pen, a wise man carries them both. "


sexymermaid6956 70F
26383 posts
5/8/2008 3:39 pm

cool i did not know you wrote in the haiku style

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Seduce my mind and my body


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