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Cautionary Tale or Perfect Match?
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Cautionary Tale or Perfect Match? Fictional humour isn't always my strongest point but I had this idea so I thought....what the hell. Although this story is intended to be true to life, none of the characters depicted below is intended to bear any resemblance whatsoever to any users on Polyamory Date, particularly anyone who might be offended. Annabel stood on the doorstep with her laptop under her arm, nervously twisting a wisp of her dark brown hair. The door opened and she knew instantly that her long journey had not been wasted. He was fabulous. A chiselled jaw, smoky blue eyes like Robert Redford, tall lissom; dangerous. She knew everything about him, his habits, likes and dislikes, what he stood for, the way the slight throatiness of his voice would make her stomach clench and melt as soon as he said hello. She had known who he was but only now could she feel what he was. He was everything. He looked at her; not so much undressing her with his eyes as looking into her heart. He smiled. "Anna, I'm Saturn5" he said, "- Max, that is!" He stood back to let her enter, then easily slipped his arm behind her shoulders and kissed her gently on the lip. She felt a surge of adrenalin in her chest, then went so limp she nearly dropped her laptop. "Oooooh, hello, it's good to finally be here" she gushed wildly, "will all my stuff be ok out there in the car for now?" "Of course, it's pretty quiet here. Come in and make yourself at home. Would you like a drink?" "Mmm, yes please, southern comfort if you have it!" He smiled and went to a cabinet by the window. The curtains were drawn hiding the cozy room from the road, and there was a fire burning in a small Victorian style grate. Very romantic. "Can I just log on and check my blog?" asked Annabel as he was pouring the drinks. "Sure, do you need to use my computer?" "No," she went on, "I can do a wireless connection on this." She logged on and went straight to her blog post. my new adventure. 15 new comments. "Perfectsmile says hello," she said over her shoulder, "I told her I was coming to meet you. She says booty is in the eye of the keyholder, whatever that means....and slipperychick says she's very jealous and she wishes she was there too, lol." Max put the southern comfort down on a coaster next to her and sipped his Jack Daniels, scrolling his eye down the page, seeing familiar photographs and smiley emoticons, plus a few unknown half-faces. "I think we should look at this one," he said softly, leaning over her. She could feel his breath on her cheek and his chest against her shoulder as he covered her hand with his and slid her finger gently across her mouse pad. He clicked her button and another post sprang up. Blogs-Annawantsu2-The Way I Feel, The Way You Feel,- my secret passions. I am a very passionate person. If we were together how would you awaken my secret passions? Sexyslave2007: Lovely post sweetheart. Hugging you. Slipperychick: Oooh well now you're asking anna, maybe I could tempt you beyond curious to a little girl on girl action. Or if not i could get earthshaker to come over and get you going for me! ROFLMAO itsUineed2006: Well annawantsu2, first I would read poetry to you. Earthsh8ker: Quoting slipperychick. If only I could anna, you know I'd be there for you. Stay happy loved one. RedRawErection: I�d slam my hug throbbing cock so deep into you and slam it and slamit agan until you beged me to stop. Wanna fuck? Saturn5: Hi there annawantsu, I love your blog. You write with such heart and passion. I don't think you need me to awaken anything. lol Annawantsu2 replies on 17.11.06: Oh Saturn, but just if I did need you, what then? Annabel lifted her chin, and found Max looking down at her. She tilted her head back even more and he kissed her, deeper this time, sliding his tongue over hers. She knew the next words on the page by heart: "I would lead you softly down a grass covered path to ecstasy, holding you in my arms like a blanket of love holds the warmth of your body." She turned towards him and smiled then kissed him again more urgently, arms round his neck. "Then I'd launch my pocket rocket!" He had won her over with his blend of romance and humor, now it was time to see if he could deliver. "Why don't we take our drinks up to the bedroom?" She said huskily. He took her arm and she rose with him, picking up the computer with her free hand and gingerly slipping her fingers inside to keep the lid open. The bedroom was paradise. Deep red curtains, an antique cotton quilt over silky sheets. "It's time," he said simply, unbuttoning her shirt and pulling his over his head. She lay on the bed as he took off the rest of his clothes, the laptop open in front of her. Perfectsmile4u: I know how passionate you are anna, that's why you mean so much to me. I truly hope you find a man who can give you every thing you deserve ~jane Monstercock: ready n waiting when you are babe. Mail me. Uglygutbucket: Emotion is the fuel of passion annawantsu2, you should know that. Max lay down beside her and ran his fingers along the inside of her thigh, over her hip and stopped to circle her perfect breast. He bent his head and began to suck softly on the hardened tip of her dark nipple. She flicked her eyes to the screen and reached out with her fingers. "quoting perfectsmile4u," she typed, "thank you jane, i think i might have already found him." Max's hands roamed over Annabel's body, lighting little fires of sensation all over her skin then slaking them with his tongue. She began to grow hot with desire, but still her fingers flickered over the keyboard, mirroring his touch on her skin. She typed as he made love to her, answering comments, checking her friend's blogs. Max pulled her head towards him and fed his stiff penis between her soft red lips, groaning with pleasure as she sucked on his solid pole. He reached down between her legs and rolled her little swollen button desperately, and she gasped with delight. But her eyes never left the screen. He lifted her hips and moved behind her. She took her weight on her elbows, and he pushed his whole length into her drenched love site in one long slow stroke. Her fingers went wild on the keyboard, blogs and email flashed before her eyes as he surfed her. Finally his climax overtook him, cum streaming out of him as he heaved back and forward, until exhausted he crashed onto the bed beside her. Annabel smiled a satisfied smile as she typed her next entry, his cum still running down the inside of her thigh: Blogs-annawantsu2-The Way I Feel, The Way You Feel-my new adventure part two: "i stood nervously at the door, hoping i hadn't been wrong about him. i needn�t have worried...... |
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how creative, I enjoyed it.
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Yeah but Romantic that was supposed to be a joke!!! I don't think even I could actually say something like that without throwing up!!! But now I read it again it does sound quite good as well as cheesey. I must have dug deep for that one!
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12/7/2006 1:01 pm |
lol...that was great! I couldn't stop laughing as I read it thinking about his poor ppl so obsessed with blogging that they couldn't even stop to fully enjoy eachothers company! 
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LMTO Well i'm glad she wasn't disappointed in him but....... I couldn't help wondering if he'd have her back again considering she couldn't get her face out of her lap top long enough to make eye contact. If that was me & some guy was typing away while i was going to town on him, the Sheets on my bed wouldn't have time to heat up before his arse was back & in the seat of his car headed for home, & my front door had been slammed shut & blotted  Until i read this post Dreamer Darlin i thought someone having a smoke while having a poke was in bad taste Get off that computer & ((((( Make Wild Whoopeeeeeeee ))))) for Faaaarrrrk sake hahaa No Bloody computers in My Boudoir i'll give you the tip hahaa. Very Funny Hun  Kissu 
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What I like about these two comments is that Willhe's blog is all mucking about, jokes flirting tips an stuff, but he comments on the serious social comment element of my story........
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LMTO Well i'm glad she wasn't disappointed in him but....... I couldn't help wondering if he'd have her back again considering she couldn't get her face out of her lap top long enough to make eye contact. If that was me & some guy was typing away while i was going to town on him, the Sheets on my bed wouldn't have time to heat up before his arse was back & in the seat of his car headed for home, & my front door had been slammed shut & blotted Until i read this post Dreamer Darlin i thought someone having a smoke while having a poke was in bad taste Get off that computer & ((((( Make Wild Whoopeeeeeeee ))))) for Faaaarrrrk sake hahaa No Bloody computers in My Boudoir i'll give you the tip hahaa. Very Funny Hun Kissu
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I've had a heavy couple of day's full of deep thought & reflection. Although i saw all aspects of this post & really enjoyed it, i chose to comment on the funny lighter side to lighten my mood.....Go figure !  Besides i've never been one to knock back a good Chuckle Kissu
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You are a gentleman Willhe, and I am truly honoured by your kind words. However I feel I must point out to others that it is you who are resposible for what I consider to be the funniest blog post of all time (well the last three months anyway) [post 572479], including the immortal line "Her Orgasm was heard all round the world" !!!
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Thanks sexydoll, lovely to see you here as always.
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Hi "curious" Ling! Yes it's "The Time Travellers Wife" by Audrey Niffenegger, and I highly recommend it. It is a highly original and fascinating story, but at its heart it's just a touching love story. My only criticism is that I think it loses its way a little somewhere towards the end, but it is still a great read. Will you be trying it, or have you alredy?
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Oh My God! And I thought I was making it all up! You should definitely read Willhe69you2's comment above LOL Great to get your viewpoint though, and well, really, - why not? But you wouldn't be typing while you were actually in the act would you? LOL
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12/8/2006 4:24 pm |
"Dreamer" suits you.  I am speechless at your creativity. REALLY...
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"Dreamer" suits you. I am speechless at your creativity. REALLY...
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12/9/2006 9:06 am |
Thank you, you are too kind, MyEnglish........fan?!!! LOL Ohhhh.... yeah... even the fan suits here. LOL Give it up already, one day you'll have to because you WILL run out of words. 
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Thanks Candy, nice to see you here. I agree, but you never know, perhaps they were both happy with the situation, after all look at double trouble's comment above!!
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HOTDREAMER ~ You'd be amazed at how the real meetings go ... But Southern Comfort and a fire? (Oh and if it's REALLY good I wouldn't be blogging about the details.) /  This is my blog - [blog _Safira]. There are many like it, but this one is mine. RECOMMENDED READING: A F F The Only Site For Me
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True. Thanks for the compliment!
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HOTDREAMER ~ You'd be amazed at how the real meetings go ... But Southern Comfort and a fire? (Oh and if it's REALLY good I wouldn't be blogging about the details.) / And yes I know no one drinks southern comfort any more (i presume that's what you meant?) But I once had an odd night with a strange woman many years ago which involved a bottle of southern comfort and annawantsu2 reminded me of her so that's what anna wants to dink! So nice to see you here on my blog, I have seen yours and it looks really interesting. I will be over later!
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12/12/2006 9:45 pm |
This is a very interesting story...we do get so caught up sometimes we forget what things are most important.  Power To FOK
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This is a very interesting story...we do get so caught up sometimes we forget what things are most important. This story was really only meant to be a bit of fun, but it has created some interesting comments so maybe I will develop the characters a bit!
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i loved it!!! beautiful! hugs,busty ..just join me on my blog bustybettyboop and still looking for some hot,sexy,creative contestants for my next contest...come join us! need a blog mentor or want to be one? 
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i loved it!!! beautiful! hugs,busty
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At least in this there was no mention of soiled laundry!
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